作者anythingwhat (琉璃)
看板ST-English
標題[寫作班] 第一週 電腦
時間Sat Nov 10 13:54:51 2007
The modern society develops more and more is as necessary fast.
The computer has become a somewhat essential item,
which the people cannot be lacked.
Both working and learning needs the computer assistance to achieve
fast processing the affect.
The computer’s developed fast, so persons all were used to talking
by e-mail, MSN, YAHOO messenger etc.
Persons have not enthusiasm and affinity anymore.
At technology, person’s emotion and environment have to balance in all.
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