作者lin91223 (Catherine de Medici)
看板Foolshome
標題用那台伴你成長的腳踏車
時間Tue Jun 16 17:19:49 2020
When I taught you
at eight to ride
a bicycle, loping along
beside you
as you wobbled away
on two round wheels,
my own mouth rounding
in surprise when you pulled
ahead down the curved
path of the park,
I kept waiting
for the thud
of your crash as I
sprinted to catch up,
while you grew
smaller, more breakable
with distance,
pumping, pumping
for your life, screaming
with laughter,
the hair flapping
behind you like a
handkerchief waving
goodbye.
昨天小雪貼ㄉ那個害阿肥想到
有人知道這個ㄇ
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1F：推 TzuyuChou117: wobble跟pump用得真不錯 06/16 17:21
2F：噓 trolkin: When I am down and oh my soul so weary 06/16 17:22
3F：→ celtics1997: Tqis ls an penis , 06/16 17:22
4F：→ lin91223: 怎麼縮ㄚ 06/16 17:23
5F：推 TzuyuChou117: 有那種一開始很蹣跚笨拙 到小屁孩想暴衝的動態感 06/16 17:24
6F：→ lin91223: 我是覺得breakable讓我有你怎麼會出現在這裡的感覺 但 06/16 17:26
7F：→ lin91223: 後來覺ㄉ其實很搭 06/16 17:26
8F：推 TzuyuChou117: 可可 06/16 17:26
9F：→ lin91223: 我覺得整ㄍ就是很有畫面感 而且很好懂 06/16 17:28
10F：推 TzuyuChou117: 好媽媽的畫面 06/16 17:29
11F：→ lin91223: 為什麼不是把拔 是因為揮手帕嗎 06/16 17:31
12F：→ lin91223: 揮手帕好像是媽媽才會想到ㄉ畫面 06/16 17:32
13F：推 TzuyuChou117: 如果是爸爸應該會說「Yooooo niiice son u finally 06/16 17:33
14F：→ TzuyuChou117: learn to ride this mofo」 06/16 17:33
15F：→ TzuyuChou117: 然後跟兒子一起暴衝 06/16 17:33
16F：→ lin91223: 好壞ㄛ 06/16 17:33
17F：推 TzuyuChou117: :)) 06/16 17:35