作者xyn (helluva fun)
看板EngTalk
標題Re: [Ask ] About self-introduction
時間Mon Oct 5 18:00:34 2009
※ 引述《gallonpower (發呆中...)》之銘言：
: Hi everyone
: I just written a self-introduction maybe
: use for interviewing in the company.
: Hope you can give me some advice to make my article look better.
: I really appriciate all your help.
: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------
: First of all thanks for interviewing me today.
First of all, thank you for taking the time to interview me.
: I am going to do self-introduction.
(I don't think the above line is needed.)
: I am XXX, a 26 years old person who lives in Taipei.
My name is XXX, I'm 26 years old this year and I live in Taipei.
: I was major in Chemistry, graduated from XX university
: and has worked as a research assistant in the same lab one years ago.
I graduated from XX University, majoring in Chemistry. I worked as a research
assistant in the same lab (<--something wrong here. There is no mention of any
lab in the above lines.) one year ago.
: During this one year, the content of my work includes performing
: the lab's plans, helping the underclassmen to solve the problem
: on experience and making movie about experience.
During my stint at the lab, the work I was assigned include performing the lab's
plans(<-- sth wrong here too. What do you mean by 'performing the lab's
plans'?), helping undergraduates gain more experience and making a movie about
their experience.
: In addition, I used my spare time to take several classes
: about computer、English、patent.
In addition, I took several classes regarding Computering, English and Patenting
in my spare time.
: It is the one of several advantages to work in XX university
: due to its abundant resource.
This is one of several advantages of working in XX University, which has abundant
resources.
: However, to be honesty, this job for me is a little easy
: and lacking of challenge.
Unfortunately, I found the job too simple and lacking in challenges.
: I like the place of my work but it is enough to stay for one year.
I liked my workplace, but I felt that working for a year there is enough.
: Now I am looking forward to working in a better learning environment.
: I think I am a responsible、optimistic person ,
: regardless of in working or in privacy.
I am a responsible and optimistic person, whether I am at work or at home.(Don't
say 'I think'. Be confident. Show that you know yourself.)
: Therefore, if I have a chance to work for your company
: I will work hard with modesty and fidelity. Thank you.
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