作者gathering (帅哥不可靠)
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标题小小小作品..
时间Sun Apr 29 03:55:10 2001
In vague and misty vision,
Who is it that I see?
Sister dear, none shall ever you replace,
Yet why does another stand beside me?
Blink of eye,
It's you once more.
Sister dear,
I miss you.
~Vel
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写的还不是很好
请各位多多指教~:)
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