作者korn31910 (罗拔)
看板poetry
标题[创作] Raining Day Child
时间Fri Mar 1 14:41:05 2019
When I saw the child under no shelter
In the heavy rain
I realized that child was me long time ago
With no fear of the look
Bred by water, and would grow up
And put you in rain, dropping
With passing passion inside
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1F：推 sylviaplath: like the theme, fix some words and cadence would03/01 16:41
2F：→ sylviaplath: be perfect!03/01 16:41
※ 编辑: korn31910 (118.166.124.170), 03/01/2019 16:59:04
3F：→ korn31910: Thank you Sylvia! :)03/01 17:00
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