作者korn31910 (罗拔)
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标题[创作] An Innocent Love Song
时间Sun Aug 26 19:39:04 2012
I buy you a shrimp
You sing me a song
You send me a plum
I write you a poem
So let us grow, like unicorns
Playing hide and seek in the real world
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1F：→ korn31910:a revision of "A Fictional Love Song"08/26 19:39
2F：推 yuuyh:一二段的感觉让我想到诗经，或许那种节奏跟你/我对比吧08/26 21:37
3F：→ yuuyh:不过我有点忘记是诗经的哪一首了(面壁...)08/26 21:38
4F：推 hahastarr:Why a shrimp?08/27 15:26
5F：→ hahastarr:I wanna buy my turtle a shrimp!08/27 15:36
6F：推 spacedunce5: 令人莞尔08/27 17:03
7F：推 hecati:有，光看前两段会有一种 "啊，诗经翻译！" 的fu~ XD08/27 18:54
8F：→ korn31910:'Cause I like shrimp XD08/27 21:51
9F：推 yuuyh:"shrimp" has a good sound, and echoes well with "plum"08/27 21:58
10F：→ yuuyh:and "poem." They all have this delicious labial sound~08/27 21:59
11F：→ yuuyh:想到诗经还有另一个原因: 一二段每行都只有5个syllables XD08/27 22:14
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