作者sylviaplath (plath)
看板poetry
标题[创作] Silence
时间Sun Jul 10 14:06:19 2011
Night quiet as spring creeks
Summer heat burns amid mountain mists
Rain came quicker than love
Diminished the shattered whisper
Hidden behind her coyness.
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