作者hecati (Do not feed the Dirtman)
看板poetry
标题[创作] A Tear in the Wing
时间Tue Jun 21 16:43:06 2011
It was a tear in the wing.
Not unbearable pain. Just
enough to remind you it happened, now and then.
The rain sprinkled down numbly,
just because
it was appropriate.
So I went out for a spin.
The air held me like a damp, over-zealous fleece blanket.
So I went to the studio,
to make my own thunder.
Uno, dos TRES. Cuatro, cinco, SEIS.
Thor would have been proud.
If I put a rainbow band-aid on the slit,
would it heal faster?
--
We are
the artists of the time,
we dream in sculpture,
dream in rhyme.
For you
we bring our world alive,
so something will survive.
--
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※ 编辑: hecati 来自: 140.122.108.20 (06/21 17:17)
1F：→ spacedunce5:推诗跟签名档！ 06/21 18:53
2F：推 spacedunce5:补推 06/21 18:55
3F：推 yuuyh:推 I like the Thor line. 06/21 22:43
4F：→ hecati:回楼上：因为有沾到神话吗？ XD Thank you both, btw ;) 06/21 23:16
5F：推 hahastarr:like like like :D 06/22 11:56
6F：→ hecati:Thanks! :) 06/22 14:36
7F：推 yuuyh:I like the shortness and bluntness of that line. The 06/23 22:30
8F：→ yuuyh:allusion is of course a pleasant surprise, which adds 06/23 22:31
9F：→ yuuyh:extra force to that line. 06/23 22:32
10F：→ hecati:I see...many thanks for your comment! 06/23 23:15
11F：→ spacedunce5:应该是 would have 吧? 06/23 23:57
※ 编辑: hecati 来自: 140.112.25.132 (06/24 20:31)
12F：→ hecati:My gosh. Thanks. I really need to brush up my grammar:P 06/24 20:33