作者cherriceadd (vb)
看板poetry
标题[创作] m
时间Sat Dec 18 13:47:40 2010
Purple clothes and Stepford Wives, galleries cuisine with southern European sun
Bathed in the shadow of love, beauty
From the lover s soul singing is something you can drink
Sunny and kissed me ink
Time and winter temperatures similar to
Holding time feels like a princess asleep and roses blooming poppy
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3F：→ frolicker:understandability.nice imagery though 111.243.215.12 12/18 14:21
4F：推 spacedunce5:to me the best part of these poems 140.112.4.170 12/18 16:39
5F：→ spacedunce5:is the pure imagery without logic 140.112.4.170 12/18 16:39
6F：→ spacedunce5:metaphor wqithout metonymy, as 140.112.4.170 12/18 16:39
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