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英诗版首po 在这里潜水很久,知道大家都很有才华啊> < 也看到好多我好喜欢的作品 我只是一个理工科系隐身在宅宅堆里的小小男人婆, 从小是说台语和阿美族话的, 15岁之前完全不知道什麽较助动词, 现在上了大学,没有修过什麽课也没读过什麽理论, 只是很喜欢读诗,也想磨磨自己的笔,希望大家可以大力鞭, 刚开始写只觉得笔很不顺,一切都很工, 希望以後笔能越磨越利!!!! I once knew an astronomer, a perfect model of decency, a curious drifter, a window lightened up high in the tower whose hometown’s a firefox icon of an island media He knows a proper place to put unbridled craze Continuing to hold onto his undimmed simplicity Hitching his winged chariot to a distant star He should not stay for a trodden ambition His flight turned into blue gems under the scarlet sky That shines the same an earth away tears subside, and I know there’s no way to be childish is there another way to make it matter another way to keep your breath close behind my scruff other than the only way it can be I had to fight off outside thoughts, other watching eyes I took the blows, shrugged off the chains In a way I thought he would apprize Under the same scarlet sky Toddling home amidst the dark I know the starlight does not suffice at the wasted corner of my silent reverie is there another way to make it matter another way to keep your breath close behind my scruff other than the only way it can be The dim light that seeps through the dome Makes me see what is not there Must I remember, still inhaling his presence He used to be here under the scarlet sky He used to be here before daylight He used to be here before daylight --



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1F:推 celestial09:wonderful! :D Man, I love this one! 140.112.4.116 09/14 22:32
2F:→ celestial09:你是谁呀? :D 认识一下 :P 140.112.4.116 09/14 22:33
3F:→ celestial09:写得真好! 第一首吗? 就写得这麽好 :D 140.112.4.116 09/14 22:33
4F:→ celestial09:我也是小时候都说台语的喔 ^^ 140.112.4.116 09/14 22:34
5F:→ souffrance:哇好开心,过奖了,这首诗的故事有兴趣 220.132.89.123 09/14 22:45
6F:→ souffrance:的人站内信给我吧,因为是自己的故事又 220.132.89.123 09/14 22:45
7F:→ souffrance:不太敢公开怕被发现XD天球大我回你信喔 220.132.89.123 09/14 22:46
8F:推 celestial09:天球大? XD 笑死我了 哈哈~ 140.112.4.116 09/14 22:49
9F:→ celestial09:最喜欢跟天文有关的诗了 ^^ 140.112.4.116 09/14 22:50
10F:推 spacedunce5:actually quite good! 61.228.86.84 09/15 00:50
11F:推 hahastarr:'tears subside'---i like that :) 60.234.28.98 09/15 09:29
12F:推 celestial09:推 a perfect model of decency! 140.112.4.115 09/15 10:29
13F:→ celestial09:推 his undimmed simplicity! :) 140.112.4.115 09/15 10:37
14F:→ celestial09:such a genuine man per se! :D 140.112.4.115 09/15 10:38
15F:→ souffrance:hi hahastarr,其实我最喜欢的是Ziva :P 220.132.89.123 09/15 10:44
16F:→ hahastarr:Tony Tony Tony Tony is the cutest lah 60.234.28.98 09/15 10:54
17F:→ hahastarr:=//= 60.234.28.98 09/15 10:55
18F:推 korn31910:Good indeed 59.115.84.47 09/16 07:39







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