作者celestial09 (Koouos :D)
看板poetry
标题[创作] Injustice of the world
时间Tue Sep 14 06:48:47 2010
Lest I turn my heart to you
Asking for your mercy －
the only place I can trun to
And I cry
For what a world it dwells on?
Justice buried underneath
And I,
seek the cloud
upon your thron.
And I cry,
asking for your fountain of wisdom and delight
Yet Satans' power has broken in verse
rivers overflowing in dirt
And wish I may, die, if I cry,
For if
narrow is the gate and
constricted is the way
And I may, wish,
my tears, will enter into your kingdom of the heavens
Thus my innocence preserved;
my conviction observed.
For it is Turth they deny － evidence upon deception.
And I may, sigh －
even the whole world is against me,
I shall, dwell,
my faith, upon thy hill
where True love prevails only when
we love our enemy
There, I saw the sun, shinning
-universally-
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-TRUTH is the absolute Beauty embedded in mind-
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