作者yuuyh (甘蔗工)
看板poetry
标题[创作] Down the mount
时间Sun Aug 15 22:01:32 2010
down the mount i go
in the rain the rain the rain
only the cap is with me
down the path of wandering dogs,
and the passengers underneath the pavillion
waiting. Then I rush in the rain,
seeking for a shelter,
like the stick-bug hurrying beside me,
big steps, awkward gaits.
To a stop I halt by,
In the rain but under a roof,
Watching the grey plain in the mystic haze,
The distant clouds breaking and collapsing,
And the light piercing out of them
From the world to come, the pandemonium of the sun.
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note: the last sentence contains two quotes from Cormac McCarthy's _All the
Pretty Horses_ and _Blood Meridian_.
(Sorry for forgetting to put on the note for another quote...)
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