作者cantare (小米家)
看板poetry
标题[创作] I am not Emily Dickinson
时间Mon Jul 5 15:44:57 2010
Poetic license
I do not have
Some grammetical errors
always haunt me at night
Sould I be isolated?
like a hermit
shallow and multi-faced
I want to omit
I just want to be a words-
worth person
worth person
Do not let pebbles in the yard
conceal my talent
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1F：推 fraviii:GRAMMATICAL111.240.231.218 07/05 16:35
2F：推 spacedunce5:actually, not that bad 140.112.7.59 07/05 16:42
3F：推 celestial09:You shouldn't be discouraged! 123.193.17.166 07/05 18:31
4F：→ celestial09:grammar can be learned, it just 123.193.17.166 07/05 18:31
5F：→ celestial09:takes time. Be prepared to be wrong 123.193.17.166 07/05 18:31
6F：→ celestial09:, it's no big deal. Meticulousity 123.193.17.166 07/05 18:32
7F：→ celestial09:kills creativity. So well.... :) 123.193.17.166 07/05 18:33
8F：推 spacedunce5:does anyone else the irony here?? 140.112.7.59 07/05 19:33
9F：推 celestial09:什麽irony呀?我怎麽没感觉到? =.= 123.193.17.166 07/05 19:47
10F：→ celestial09:是我太迟钝吗? XD 123.193.17.166 07/05 19:47
11F：→ celestial09:不会是在讽刺我吧?嗄? XD 我没感觉也 123.193.17.166 07/05 19:50
12F：→ celestial09:反正CJ 也是好心帮我们改错误ㄚ 123.193.17.166 07/05 19:55
13F：→ celestial09:那很好ㄚ~ 无所谓啦~~ XD 123.193.17.166 07/05 19:55
14F：推 hahastarr:I think the writer did it on purpose. 122.62.57.74 07/06 07:11
15F：→ hahastarr:tho I'm kinda grammatically lost lol 122.62.57.74 07/06 07:12
16F：→ celestial09:所以是在讽刺我吗? 为啥我看不懂呀@@ 140.112.4.87 07/06 08:50
17F：→ celestial09:可是又好像不是也? 一头雾水 = = 140.112.4.87 07/06 08:51