作者celestial09 (Koouos :D)
看板poetry
标题[创作] Cloister
时间Thu Jun 10 13:19:56 2010
The sunset slips in
with a gentle touch
Along the cloister
The wind passionately
echoes
echoes
echoes
ghostly wonder -
The last leaf falls on our textbook
years of longing, reminisce of decadence
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1F：推 spacedunce5:not bad; a bit of a twist ending 140.112.7.59 06/10 13:57
※ 编辑: celestial09 来自: 123.193.24.253 (06/10 16:25)
2F：→ celestial09:我想把 descendence 改成 ascendance 123.193.24.253 06/10 21:21
3F：→ celestial09:可是那就不符合我以前现实的状况了XD 123.193.24.253 06/10 21:22