作者korn31910 (浮出水面的大肚猫)
看板poetry
标题[创作] Birds
时间Wed May 5 13:15:03 2010
Silver beak in.
Red beak out.
Silver beak in.
Red beak out.
Bandages around their arms,
One Jesus goes and another comes.
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1F:推 spacedunce5:delightful poem; watch for typos140.112.115.224 05/05 13:18
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3F:推 celestial09:quite powerful. :D 123.193.24.253 05/05 19:51