作者korn31910 (浮出水面的大肚猫)
看板poetry
标题[创作] The Whistling Kettle
时间Sat Mar 20 11:04:40 2010
I waited for the boiling water,
And Daddy called me.
He showed me his toy.
I didn't like the toy.
He didn't like my shirt.
He didn't like my skirt.
He told me to hold his toy.
I said no and he was mad.
He punished me by the toy.
The water was crying.
He told me to get out.
He said he needed a rest.
I waited for the boiling water,
And Daddy dragged me.
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