作者emilychang31 (日日囍)
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标题[请益] 初次尝试
时间Tue Mar 10 15:10:58 2009
突然兴起写了首诗纪念最近的日子
希望大家给我一些建议
Agony no longer exists within me anymore
Numbness took me over as a whole
First I shivered at the sight of him during lunch
despite the heat and the midday sun
Recalling the unspeakable morning I came to grief
it surprised me with my very own sigh of relief
I curse no one and blame no one
It is written for things to have gone
We are far apart and contrary
Our lack of devotion made this dreary
No one can stand the distance and lonliness
Filling my time with constant emptiness
The retrospect of video made me smile
as I wandered lonely down the aisle
It is truth that there's no bright future
I am glad I get the picture
Fate may brought us together
Yet no need to ruffle one's feather
Thank you for the time we shared
and the days I felt so secure and cared
就只有这些了
我的韵脚和对仗做的没有很好
拜托各位 多多指教了
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