作者pcchuckwu (holy)
看板poetry
标题[创作] Lost Passion
时间Sun Nov 16 01:16:19 2008
So tell me,
Why did your heart
Stop beating?
Had all the fishes left your pond,
Without a crust within your palm?
Or had snows pre-melt,
That chilled you drenchly calm?
But now, as our ways do part,
For once a pace that has knocked its psalm,
But halt as brupt, echoing about…
It is still
Life, that has left your vein…
Along with my heart
That has
Passed
Away,
With Thee.
观过往数月，
叹诗笔难啭，
故为诗以纾窘困之态。
2008/11/16
以下注解是给对了解文义有困难的版友的提示:
1."drenchly"一字为我之自创，但是意思和其字面差不多。
2."brupt"一字即"abrupt"省略前面的"a"字。字义无任何改变。
希望有助於各位的阅读!
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Let not a drop of desire
Disturb the heart in ripples
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