作者korn31910 (浮出水面的大肚猫)
看板poetry
标题[创作] Cats in Cages
时间Wed Mar 5 16:28:20 2008
Locked in the rest homes blue and red
Those in tabby pattern
They do not talk, but eat
And sleep
With eyes blank
Watch the young in the street
Come and go
Talking about how expensive
Should an American shorthair be
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