作者fleuve (哈) :)
站内poetry
标题[创作] Dun need your salvation
时间Wed Oct 11 04:02:29 2006
After reading the above poems, I envy everybody so much for your such
beautiful poems.
The poem below was just a memo to my dearest...well, shall I call him
friend?
And that was the first time I tried to write this kind of thing...
It was written this June, when I was still stuck in that terrible JCEE exam.
I just thought of him, thinking about his leaving, our interactions and
things happened during the so-called one and a half year.
We had quarrels with each other, and he sometimes just being callous,
pretending that i didn't exist if i didn't talk to him first = ="
So most of the time in my point of view, he's kinda "inconceivable"
or "unbearable." XDD But he was actually a very nice person; he cared
about me very much.
`Cause it's the first time I write this kind of thing (I even seldom write
poems in Chinese XD), the words and structure I use would be just very
simple.
So if you have any comment, just let me know. Thanks!
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Dun need your salvation
Dun know yet to cry
After hearin your leavin
and words you spoke to me
`Cause I relied too much on thee
that for so many years I even forget how to fly
What would happen then
if there's nothing forcin me to stay behind
Shall I just walk away
and breathe your lie?
--
生命的意义不在追求答案,答案
只是另一个答案的问题,
生命在於去
体会与
经历,不管生活在哪里。
╭╮───╪───╭╮
* fleu
ve *
╰╯───╪───╰╯
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