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标题[请益] 请教中英诗歌创作圣手帮忙润稿"保肾秘诀歌"
时间Mon Jul 24 00:53:49 2006
各位板友大家好:
在嘉义市推广社区肾脏保健卫教工作历经荜路蓝缕的草创时期迄今已一年,结合了
圣马尔定医院肾脏保健团队众人的力量创作了这首保肾秘诀歌,可以用台语及国语吟唱,
我们希望这首言简意赅的诗歌能够与国际透析与非透析肾友们分享,因此不自量力尝试
做一个英文的诗歌翻译版本,希望在今年耶诞节能将福音广披於大众!
保肾秘诀歌 The Tips of Kidney Health Promotion
贫血水肿人疲劳 Anemia, generalized edema, lethargy appearance
尿泡不断血压高 Persistent foamy urine with hypertension
钾磷油盐若贪食 If you eat too much potassium, phosphate and greedy food,
肾衰百病提前到 you will have renal disease with complications very often
信任医生第一宝 The most impportant method to keep kidney heatlh is to
believe the registered nephrologist
预防胜过治疗好 Prevention is always superior to dialysis in the streategy
of chronic kidney disease management
腰子心肝兼顾在 To keep heart, liver and kidney fit,
彩色人生无烦恼 will lead an abundant and colorful life
此外,为因应8月底国民健康局的肾脏保健机构观摩会需要,希望能够将中英文诗体
谱成信达雅兼备,易於琅琅上口的作品,笔者在诸罗城绞尽脑汁仍无法突破创作瓶颈,盼
本板大师们能够指点迷津,嘉惠云嘉南广大肾友之需求,则吾人生当衔环,死当结草相报
,并为您献上最真挚的祝福:主佑平安!
参考网页:
http://www.stm.org.tw/pcc/op-03-3.htm
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