作者pcchuckwu (holy)
看板poetry
标题[创作] Tea Time, Retreat
时间Mon Dec 12 23:39:54 2005
Tea Time, Retreat
Stillness, ripe in breeze
Sweeping the day cozy and sweet;
A lazy cat, sleeping away
What final wish beyond Eden to dream,
Saying goodbye, waving up high,
Para shoot landing not for delight,
Destruction works under every busy fleet
Crunchy chips, erosion to pieces
Below trampling troops, hasty soldiers
To war or retreat, eventually to peace
Swift tide in ride knocking dizziness ashore,
Rippling the mirror rarely calm,
Dotted destiny within the sea of ash
Blighted devotion to poison the mind,
Suits of protection need not be clean
If to shield behind a heart too weak,
Healing apothecary for what tenderness in need,
Seeking remedy in every refining sip
Lacking benevolent touch of Apollo's grace
To sing once more a festival splendor
Hatching chrysalis with struggling cracks,
Grasping a pot full of gold
I melt my heart into glittering jewels.
Why spreading wings
before the springtime window?
I try to dust what clouds the sky,
Meteors on fire, diamond cuts so clear,
Inspiring awes from wishes not ready for flight.
I cherish a wonder in the hall of apathy,
Burning incense for my restless thoughts:
What I am to become?
A Spirit being worshipped,
Or fat salmon in smoke?
A simple reverse to break away
Or breaking free to pave my way?
Nevertheless,
I seek counsel, I seek grace.
(Ceremony and chant, prayers to compose,
Guiding angels through murmurs of old,
A shrine of worship to crystal them whole;
I, the priest, pleading thy mercy
Oracle given in just a reflective twist,
One sticking finger to spin the world;
Pair of eyes to see them whole.)
Ah… And now I see…
Fluidic color distilled and compressed,
Brilliant blaze devoted in reflect,
Inspiration depleted I regain them all
With boiling streams to seal and extract,
Particles swim free
Chants of vigor to revive what battered and weak,
Casting gold string upon my lyre in mute,
Waking butterflies in their winter dreams,
I wipe away what filth bruising the view
Foul water once dead, resurrect and purify,
To surround myself in a Elysium of peace,
Sound and sight be purged of shadow
Radiant warmth soothing what chilling gloom,
Urgent steps I play in motion so slow,
Ignoring present burden to cherish the day,
Flow and ebb within balance of nature,
One brown leaf to nourish another
Winter sacrifice to please the spring to come,
I lay quiet, apathetic yet free
Sharing fruit of the philosopher's dream,
Speaking the tongue of sleepy delight
Still a day cozy and sweet
Delicate breeze to spread my satisfied wish.
下次不写长诗了啦!!!
(其实好像也不长阿…)
明明就超出自己的能力范围,
还要去蛮干。
不过,
当野心必须霸占那麽多空间时,
不写长一点,的确不能让自己舒坦,
毕竟写作的目的是安抚自己心中的野火。
後来发觉这个长度好像是常态,
真的不得不佩服那些着名诗人了。
(该开始啃英诗写作理论了吗?)
2005/12/12
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Let not a drop of desire
Disturb the heart in ripples
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