作者pcchuckwu (holy)
看板poetry
标题[创作] Rose Garden
时间Tue Oct 11 01:21:50 2005
Rose Garden
A corner to tend,
Delicate woven fence,
Fragrances in blend,
Tranquility intense.
To bath within ease,
Seizing time serene.
To sing under breeze,
Youthful heart unseen.
An Eden to cherish,
All agony perish!
Color in attraction,
Thorns to keep distance,
Pressure ceases motion,
Awe in persistence.
To accompany grace,
Lush shades of green.
A poets' steady pace,
Blossoms warm and clean.
Feast in utmost delight,
Elegance free for a bite.
Afternoon for tea,
Picnic cloth to spread.
Delicate peddles to see,
Young shoots to tread.
Cheese cakes of silk,
Black tea in twinkle.
Streaming joy as milk,
Merry mirth to sprinkle.
To plant a garden of leisure,
Harvesting few hours of pleasure.
(此诗是我写给某人的生日贺礼)
感想:古典格式的诗,可能光凑字就有的忙了...
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