作者vampraths (良夜)
看板poetry
标题[创作]Semi-Eternity
时间Fri Jul 1 01:01:15 2005
Just now? says who?
Before a new word emerges
There are no angel's ashes
None-existing? says who?
What i see my eyes hold fast
Goes nothingness in my grasps
Silence the Eternity? says who?
Tangles deeper than one remembers
Lingers the mermaid around the corner
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其实有中文版呢...
http://www.wretch.cc/blog/vampraths&article_id=203530
觉得意境有差> <
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http://www.wretch.cc/blog/vampraths
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