※ 引述《PowLluimniz (波西米亚)》之铭言： : Instead of a comment, I think what I have are two little suggestions. : I am not sure if you'd want 'em, but you may want to consider before : you sing the lines out. Thanks for your two "little" suggestions,they mean a lot to me! Thanks again~ : First, maybe the second Phoebe part can be fixed, as it does not really : parallel with the first part and Sandy's and tracy's do. Yeah...you're right. But I couldn't think of something better.(for now) : little peculiar a beggar would say something like hoping the Communism : could have worked out. S/he must be an educated beggar. The one who were "mumuring about communism should work it out" was "I" in the song. So I geuess I made a mistake in grammar? But, actually, I think your guess (a beggar who murmurs about communism) is pretty interesting. And it's really not that weird if a beggar has that kind of....."knowledge" in Taiwan. (in my experience) : Second, it surprises me when "Holy cow" appears. I think maybe it could : be put in some other ways. Are you writing the lyric for some rock songs? Ah....I think I tend to think of some lines in rock songs when I'm writng (whatever things, even homework) : I believe this could be a good song. It feels so good to hear you say so, though maybe you're just being polite.^^" : no link for this in this article. --

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