作者catcatcatcat (猫猫猫猫  )
看板poetry
标题[创作] Practice S
时间Mon Apr 25 03:01:55 2005
< Practice S >
She sits
slowly
and silently
(Seeing sun sinks
into the Sea)
as catS.
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第一次写,害羞的po上来是希望大家可以给个指教
批评或纠正都好^^感谢~~
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