作者dale (冰城城主)
看板poetry
标题Re: [创作] Garden
时间Sat Apr 23 22:27:34 2005
Even though the poem is not divided by stanzas,
but the contrast between the first six lines
and the last six lines are clear.
The first six lines contain a parade of "useful"
plants, e.g., beans, cabbages, etc., all of which
have obvious monetary values. The last six lines,
on the other hand, are used to describe a single
rose. This is plurality versus singularity,
planned versus unplanned -- a concerto, between
the rest of the band, and the majestic piano.
Which insinuates profoundly where the poet's
values reside: I'm guessing that he had
chosen something unworldly over something
mundane ... just a guess.
I like this poem, good work. *^^*
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我就不另外发文公告了。^^
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