作者a411120 (苏子)
看板X-Japan
标题[心得] Voiceless Screaming 中文翻译
时间Thu Apr 16 09:24:53 2009
以下翻译因为参杂着个人的情感、诠释
并不完全符合原文的直译、文法
翻译的目标则是希望能呈现出原曲清新、忧郁、从混沌走向积极的感觉
虽然应该还是翻得不好
但应该不会让人感到过於煽情、芭乐
也不会像翻译机一样过於平铺直述
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Voiceless Screaming
(作词:TOSHI、作曲:TAIJI)
I'm drawning in sadness. 我沉浸在悲伤之中...
Falling Far behind. 被远远地抛在後方...
I feel there id just no way out. 感觉毫无出路...
Is there anyone there? Where am I? 那儿有人在吗?我又在哪里呢?
Insanity & loneliness. 错乱和孤寂
Tear my painful heart. 撕裂我痛楚的心...
Broken heart keeps on going to beat. 虽然破碎的心仍不断跳动
But it never stops bleeding. 但却永远也无法止住它的淌血...
I've waiting for love to come. 我在等待爱的到来
Someone who wants to touch me inside. 等待着某个愿意深触我心的人...
Memories of my yesterdays. 过往回忆中
Careless work and deeds. 尽是无心的工作和行动
Masquerade of love. 以及伪装的爱...
Gotta find my way outta here. 一定要找到脱离现状的方法
I was blinded by dark desire. 我被邪恶的慾望所蒙蔽
Over time I've been through it all. 过了许久才完全走出...
I'm crying my share of tears. 我放声哭泣
What can I do. 我能做些什麽?
Will I make it through? 我真的能度过这一切吗?
I must be true to myself. 一定要坦诚面对真正的自己
Voiceless Screaming ! 无声的呐喊!
Calling to me inside of my heart. 将我唤回内心的深处
Voiceless Screaming ! 无声的呐喊!
Now is the time I got to speak out. 该是倾泄的时候了
Voice of faith,I'm starting to realize. 此刻我才明白原来信念是有声的
Now my eyes can see. 我的双眼终於能真正的看见
I have gone so far. 即使我已走得太远
I'm feeling breath of life. 但已能感受到生命的气息
And I'm looking for love to reach. 我在寻觅着爱
Someone I want touch deep inside. 寻觅着某个我愿意深触其内心的人...
Light shines on my sight of doubt. 光线将我犹疑的眼神给照亮
Don't be afraid. 别害怕
Move forward one step. 向前跨出第一步
Willing mind is what I have found at last. "心甘情愿"是我最後所学到的事
Voiceless Screaming ! 无声的呐喊!
Calling to me inside of my heart. 将我唤回内心深处
Voiceless Screaming ! 无声的呐喊!
Now is the time I gor to speak out. 该是倾泄的时候了
Voiceless Screaming ! 无声的呐喊!
Calling to me inside of my heart. 将我唤回内心深处
Knochin' on my soul's door. 敲开我的心门
I believe in myself & trust what I do. 相信自己及曾做过的事
Voiceless Screaming ! 无声的呐喊!
Pain of the past still hurts me inside. 过往的痛楚依然深深地伤害着我
Knockin' on my soul's door. 敲开我的心门
I climb the stairs that lead me to heaven. 我沿着通往天堂的阶梯攀爬着...
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※ 编辑: a411120 来自: 218.165.196.69 (04/16 09:33)
1F:推 plasticlife:感谢翻译 我超爱这首歌的 >"< toshi的声音... 04/16 10:18
2F:推 plasticlife:然後我喜欢倒数二、三段的翻译诠释! 04/16 10:21
3F:推 hinu:歌名是不是打错了 04/16 13:40
4F:推 bloodpiece:有打错吗? 楼上 04/16 13:47
5F:→ bloodpiece:是抓的档名不一样吗 XD 04/16 13:47
6F:推 XmegumiX:歌名的确打错了 是screaming啊 04/16 14:14
7F:推 bloodpiece:标题歌名没打错啊@ @ 04/16 14:15
8F:→ bloodpiece:看到了..内文的歌名- - 04/16 14:16
修正打错的字
※ 编辑: a411120 来自: 218.165.196.69 (04/16 14:57)
9F:推 ronaldo52029:超爱这首!!! 感觉听了心也会痛~ 04/16 18:15