听到翻译练习这首歌的感觉 以及翻译练习的歌词 心中一直想到一个单字 Hyaline a. 形容词: 透明的 n. 名词: 1 【诗】镜似的海 2 蓝天 以下附上我的英文翻译练习:(请多指教!!) "翻译练习" 词/曲:韦礼安 中翻英by Etsu 海是什麽样的颜色 What color is the ocean 蓝是什麽样的快乐 What kind of happiness is blueness 我用字句拼凑的景色 I made up the scenery with words 到底适不适合 完全传达我的 Is that adequate enough~to completedly conveyed 你是什麽样的角色 What kind is your characater 给我什麽样的快乐 What happiness you might given 我的字汇到底够不够格 Are my words qualified 把你铺陈在 字里行间呢 To compose you among the words 每一字每一句 Every words Every verse 全部留给你最真的表情 Leaving you all the truest expression 寻找最完美的翻译 Seeking for the most perfect translation 形容你 是最难的练习 Describing you is the hardest praticing 以为有无数的选择 I thought there are numerous choices 描绘我心底的长河 illustraing my mind's long river 斟酌不定思绪又乾涸 hesitating and my inspiration get dried 原文太过深刻 译文该当如何 The original is too profound How to make a good translation 每一字每一句 Every word Every verse 全部留给你最真的表情 Leaving you all the truest expression 寻找最完美的翻译 Seeking for the most perfect translation 形容你 是最难的练习 Describing you is the hardest praticing 我把你 的涟漪 I take your rippling 画上璀璨的外衣 with splendid outfit 太过俗丽的言语 却不是你 Too twee language but not thee 每一字每一句 Every word Every verse 全部留给你最真的表情 Leaving you all the truest expression 寻找最完美的翻译 Seeking for the most perfect translation 形容你 是最难的练习 Describing you is the hardest praticing 是最美的旅行 is the most beautiful touring 海是什麽样的颜色 What color is the ocean 蓝是什麽样的快乐 What kind of happiness is blueness -------------------------------- 想跟外国朋友分享这首歌的意思 希望大家对於我的翻译不吝指教! --

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