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标题[分享]30分回忆整合写作&口说Part2-SK2冲刺Li-Yi
时间Thu May 2 13:53:41 2024
大家好,我是积极陷入回忆、每天一回忆的SK2冲刺班口说顾问Li-Yi(茶)。
今天想来分享2月底考30分的整合作文与另一回30分口说音档,
希望对备战的朋友有点帮助
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#整合写作回忆文
这篇的原始来源估计是这儿:
https://www.oxfordreference.com/view/10.1093/oi/authority.20110803100401430
我的回忆文:
The article and the lecture both discuss whether a tomb site in East England
indeed belongs to King Raewald. While the author claims that the dating and
the size of the grave as well as the silverware inscribed with Christian
names all suggest that the king was buried there, the lecturer is clearly
against this idea.
First, according to the reading, the objects found in the grave matches with
the time when the ruler passed. In contrast, the lecturer holds that
radiocarbon dating has not been very effective in determining the age of
items in burial grounds. Plus, there's no consensus in the academia regarding
the exact year in which Raewald died.
Next, the author asserts that only powerful leaders like King Raewald can
possess such a grand gravesite with so many valuable items buried inside.
However, the speaker disagrees with this assumption. because there's no other
graveyards from the same era found so far; thus it's not possible to verify
it.
Lastly, the author points out that the silver utensils found in the tomb
contain the names of two early Christians, indicating that the owner of the
grave should be a Christian ruler like King Raewald. The counterargument of
the lecturer is that those goods might be gifts from Christians instead of
the possession of a Christian ruler. They might have become part of the
burial collection because they were made of precious metal. That is to say,
there's no direct evidence to prove that their owner was Raewald and that the
tomb site was his.
这是一篇Hemingway App判定为Grade12阅读程度的文章
(通常判定标准是句子里面的字数和句型)
写的时候容易重复的字有
a. 题目的主角名、坟墓: 这真的只能凭着自己当下的能力去变换. king/ruler/leader,
grave/graveyard/gravesite/tomb/tomb site
b.讲者、作者/文章、各式各样的"说(声称/抗议/反对)(可准备)
c. 转折、延伸字(可准备)
b&c自己过滤整理了一下附图,希望对某些同学有帮助
https://imgur.com/Rln7zUE
2. 到底要想好再写还是边想边写?
我现在倾向句子想得比较完整再写.宁可多想10秒钟.
因为在下打字并不是飞快,上面一句以句号为边界的句子大概至少要30-40秒.
不管是word order没想好或打错字,
每次下笔再改字又要+5-10秒/字.所以宁可想好或慢慢打易错单字
3. 写大概15-17分钟.检查3分钟
4. 细节字数: 因为这是很久後基於当初回忆笔记的回忆(饶舌),所以具体细节没有办
法. 当下写的应该要更多.我看一般建议也是写到280-300比较好(虽然Test Ready里面范
例题建议150-225字(!!
另一天考试30分的口说回忆
#口说回忆题
音档在此:
https://bit.ly/202404Task1-2_30
I definitely prefer to live in a place that is quiet but very far away from
the school instead of a place that is very close to the school but surrounded
by shops because I can get more things done that way. For example, I remember
in my first year of college, I did live very close to the university and
there were so many department stores and little boutiques surrounding that
area. All day long I was thinking about how I wanted to spend my money, what
I wanted to buy, etc. I wasn't paying attention to studying at all. However,
after moving to this quiet dorm that was a little bit far away from the city
in the suburban areas, I found out that I could really get more studying done
because there was nothing else to do anyways.
持平来说,内容没有比2月底30分回答更具体、冗字也比较多一点.
印象中当下文法也是有小错. 因为考试前一天整个缺乏睡眠整个当机.
但秉持着一快遮三丑的精神下去应考(这141字/188wpm),也30分
若你平常的回答连顾问或母语者都说很好、但分数还是上不去的同学,
提高速度是你应该尝试的方向. 短期就是在模板句子上塞字(e.g.副词形容词)、
整合增加缓冲的reporting verb (the professor goes on to explain that...),
长期就是多练习常用句型代换字,才能在脑中把一句话当成一个字automatic讲出
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并且带大家操作这些常用句型
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