【写作】整合题型 - 一目了然的阅读主题句 大家好，我是Pin TOEFL Lucy 官网好读版：https://reurl.cc/YjN9z0 我们Pin TOEFL同学回馈最实用的服务，莫过於冲刺班结束後无限次的口说写作顾问回馈。过去几周连续帮这期要考试的学生批改文章，(thankfully) 流畅度都有很明显的提升。模板运用正确，文章比例ok，文法也更谨慎了 然而批改TPO 11 - Task 1 的作文，我发现大家都犯了一个共通的失误，因此决定发文提醒，也顺便跟其他正在准备托福写作的考生分享~~ 考生注意：Body Paragraph第一句，Reading重点务必抓对资讯！ Example (本周练习文章) TPO 11 - Task 1: 这篇整合题型探讨的是阅读文学书籍的大众下滑，所带来的影响。阅读部分阐述三个负面影响，而听力内容反驳作者的意见。 TPO 11 Reading Paragraph 3 [第二论点] Unfortunately, missing out on the benefits of literature is not the only problem. What are people reading instead? Consider the prevalence of self-help books on lists of best sellers. These are usually superficial, poorly written, and intellectually undemanding. Additionally, instead of sitting down with a challenging novel, many persons are now more likely to turn on the television, watch a music video, or read a Web page. Clearly, diverting time previously spent in reading literature to trivial forms of entertainment has lowered the level of culture in general. 因为大家习惯Reading主题句会出现在第一二句，所以很多同学把作文第一句写成关於people become more superficial is they don’t read literature. 或是reading books that are not literature is undemanding. 这时，我们也可以透过听力反驳内容确认阅读/听力的一致性： TPO 11 Listening script Paragraph 3 But let's say that people aren't just spending less time with literature, they're also spending less time with books in general. Does that mean that the culture is in decline? No. There's plenty of culturally valuable material that isn't written: music and movies, for example. Are people wasting their time when they listen to a brilliant song or watch a good movie? Do these non-literary activities lower cultural standards? Of course not. Culture has changed. In today's culture there are many forms of expression available other than novels and poems, and some of these creative forms speak more directly to contemporary concerns than literature does. 由此可知，我们本段Reading的主题句攸关Culture。重点在最後面！ 主题句正确修改：The author states that the level of culture has declined in general because people are not reading literature as much. 另外一个Reading文章的提示，作者於第一段的最後一句已声明接下来的三论点：This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for culture in general, and for the future of literature itself. 以上，是本周写作大家都有犯的错误，考前练习以及实际考试请多加留意！注意阅读听力的main idea，这样整合写作才会是一篇清楚又逻辑顺畅的文章。 - Pin TOEFL Lucy Pin TOEFL冲刺班：https://reurl.cc/2oGZ2r ※ 编辑: royz (223.140.30.84 台湾), 12/01/2021 14:51:47