在前往米国念MBA前，回馈一下板友。这麽久的心得还有人写信来问我，我就直接po版分享 我当初的写作练习。文字或者文法如有错误，请多包涵。 在此，我想要分享的是写作架构以及内文。 就我在送佛学习，Austin 老师的论点分析真的上的很好。题目分成Technology, Education, Government and Career. 每个大主题都教大家怎麽想论点，然後发展成主题句 。这堂课很值得上。另外，Karen 老师写作课提到，作文内容的发展就是例子尽 量越丰富越好。所以，我後来都是写四段，我的五段太过单调。我认为，多数的大家针对题 目想到的理由都差不多，所以，真的需要用例子的内容发展的不同，分数才有差异。总之， 如果你在送佛上课，这两位老师的作文课千万不要翘课! TPO 20 独立写作练习 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 题目解读:审题!!!!! 关键字: successful people =>trying new things and taking risks > old skills 立场: Agree 理由一: successful people always stay curious about things=> never be satisfied of what they got => keep moving forward 理由二: successful people are always courageous to step out of the comfort zone => more opportunities 第一段模板: Although….., I believe…. . The reason is that…1..In addition, ...2... Hence, I agree/disagree with the statement that… Although repetition in practice makes one’s skill perfect and outstanding, I believe that taking risks to open a new door in a field always outweighs practicing the old skills. The reason is that being curious to new things always brings innovation, which leads to success. In addition, staying courageous to step out of the comfort zone always open to new opportunities and that contributes to achievement as well. Hence, I agree with the statement that successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well. 这里的两个理由，就是等一下我body段落的两个主题句 如果有时间，我会在主题句换句话说一下 如果实在没时间，我就直接copy down Body 段落，就是要解释理由。所以我通常会直述理由，再用一句加以解释理由。第三句就 开始讲例子。通常例子是否丰富就是得分的关键，所以，我宁可写两段body好好的交代清楚 我的内容，而非三段。我想这大概就是我拿28的原因! 感谢Karen 老师 First,being curious to new things always brings innovation, which leads to success. This means one should always stays hungry to try new things. Take Steve Jobs for an example. we know he made the first Macintosh computer and Mac OS when he was in his twenties. Yet, he wasn’t satisfied what he had got. He started to set up another animation company, Pixnet, and the movies made by this company also became very popular. After these successful companies, he went back to Macintosh and led his team to produce the “i-series” products, a series of killer application of touch panels, MP3, and even laptops. The “i-series” gained the huge success and have been popular worldwide till today. Steve Jobs is a best example to illustrate how a successful person does. If he followed the footsteps of most of the Harvard students, he definitely would graduate from the prestigious school. However, he probably would not start his own business and Apple would still remain as a dream. Second, being courageous to step in a new field always stimulate new thoughts and ideas, which brings more opportunities to himself. For example,the founder of Wikipedia, Jimmy Wales, was a trader of futures in Chicago. After he earned enough money, he quitted his job andstarted to set up the non-pr ofit website “Wikipedia”. The website now is the largest online encyclopedia and has most users coming from more than 100 countries. The website is also translated in over 50 languages. It is indeed beneficial for many people and creates the online interaction among different people in different countries. Now we can look up almost everything in our daily life through Wikipedia. If he didn’t decide to set up this website and take this risks, maybe we will have such a good internet resource. 我的结论段，就是将我的首段在换句话说一下而已。 In conclusion, based on the above reasons, I believe that without being curious, one would stop chasing his dream, so he would not be successful. Also, without having courage, one would stay in his comfort zone, then he would not open his door to his success. Therefore, I agree with the statement that successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well. 希望这篇说明，能帮到大家! 祝大家顺利 --

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