※ 引述《vitte (天堂 咫尺可及)》之铭言： : 请问各位创作同好： : 我们通常被教导"单一场次情节须於单一场景内发生" : 凡是场景一更换　就要进入下一场次 : 但是 : 若面对「打电话情节」或者「A/B时空同时进行情节」 : 究竟该如何处理？ 没什麽特别的写法，就用简单的文字说明，让剧组了解就好： 如： 在三角形後写一句，多景顺剪以下场景： A. 管线 / 日 - 人物：ETHAN 与 KRIEGER B. 电脑室 / 日 - 人物：分析师 然後开始写剧本时，在每个三角形後，注明A或B, 或直接把管线：或电脑室：写进去 就好了～ : 例如： : 电影【不可能的任务】 : 常常会出现　夥伴在箱型车上看监视器、下指令 : 阿汤哥在大楼里戴耳机听指令　躲避敌人兼不断挺进的状况 : 这两个时序同时并进　但空间却相隔两地 : 可能箱型车同伴下两句指定　阿汤哥就跑两步遇到一个状况 : 阿汤哥打一打杀一杀後　箱型车同伴又继续给予指示 : 请问这种场景不断对跳的场面 : 剧本究竟该怎麽写？？ : 难道我可以在场景说明时 : 直接写「场景：箱型车内（夥伴）+CIA大楼楼梯间（阿汤哥）」吗？ : 还是每个单一场景都要分开写？ : 恳请知情者指正 : 感激不尽！ 你提到了不可能的任务，何不看看人家怎麽写？ http://www.imsdb.com/scripts/Mission-Impossible.html 它没分段/分页/分场次，请 ctrl+F 找到第一个关键字：RAT（老鼠） 我们来看看经典的偷密码战在剧本里是怎麽写的～ 这场戏从尚雷诺在管道间里看到老鼠开始： 有四个场景：管道 Duct 电脑室 Computer Room 救火车 Fire Truck 男厕所 Men's 切换场景，无论那场戏是不是单镜头，编剧也只是写：INT. （反正导演自己会剪) 滴汗那场戏，他只也只是加了 -- 而已～ 人物：Krieger / 尚雷诺 Ethan / 阿汤哥 Luther / 黑人电脑专家 　　　TECHNICIAN / 一直在吐的白人电脑管理员（CIA ANALYST） ========== INT. DUCT - DAY KRIEGER shakes with the strain of holding the rope. His eyes suddenly widen as he sees something next to him. It's a rat. KRIEGER stares. The rat stares back. Neither moves. Puzzled by KRIEGER'S lack of response, the rat crawls forward, inquisitive. KRIEGER's eyes water, his nose twitches. He's about to sneeze. INT. FIRE TRUCK - DAY LUTHER pulls himself together and WHISPERS another command into the microphone. LUTHER You've done it. Eject it. INT. CIA - COMPUTER ROOM - DAY The 3.5 disk is ejected from the floppy drive. ETHAN pockets it and signals to be raised. Slowly, his body starts to move up. As it does, a bead of sweat rolls down his nose, balling at the tip. ETHAN ignores it. But below him, he sees the floor tiles, four of them lit up under the wheels of the chair at the computer terminal. His eyes widen as he realizes something -- --the drop of sweat falls -- --and he catches it with his right hand. INT. CIA - MEN'S - DAY CIA ANALYST crosses corridor from restricted access door to bathroom. A toilet FLUSHES, smashing the silence, and the TECHNICIAN staggers out of the bathroom. He goes to the sink and throws some water on his face. He's still unaware of the piece of shiny metallic tape stuck to his shoulder blade. He walks out of the bathroom, crosses corridor to door. INT. FIRE TRUCK - DAY On one of LUTHER'S laptops, the blinking cursor starts to move down a corridor. LUTHER speaks into his microphone. LUTHER He's rolling. Get moving! INT. CIA - COMPUTER ROOM - DAY ETHAN is near the ceiling, but KRIEGER isn't pulling any more. ETHAN looks up at him, wide-eyed and gestures to pull him up. KRIEGER shakes his head no. ETHAN gestures -- "WHAT?!" INT. FIRE TRUCK - DAY The cursor is halfway across the screen. LUTHER Get out of there -- get out of there -- INT. CIA - COMPUTER ROOM - DAY ETHAN still dangles. Holding the rope with one hand, KRIEGER holds out his other, demanding something. He wants the disk. INT. CIA CORRIDOR/GUARD STATION - DAY The TECHNICIAN makes his way back down the corridor, toward the computer room. INT. FIRE TRUCK - DAY The blinking cursor is near the edge of the screen and LUTHER is sweating. LUTHER He's at the vault - get moving! 1 yellow, 2 yellows...Toast! INT. CIA - COMPUTER ROOM - DAY ETHAN, still hanging upside down, has refused. KRIEGER demands again. INT. CORRIDOR/GUARD STATION - DAY The TECHNICIAN passes through the optometric scanner. INT. FIRE TRUCK - DAY LUTHER You're not moving! INT. CIA - COMPUTER ROOM - DAY ETHAN is hoisted up. INT. FIRE TRUCK - DAY LUTHER Phew! (to himself) NOC list. INT. CIA - COMPUTER ROOM - DAY ETHAN has the diskette in his mouth. KRIEGER leans down and takes it. He drops the knife. KRIEGER Merci. ETHAN We're not outta here yet. INT. CIA - COMPUTER ANTEROOM - DAY The TECHNICIAN deactivates the alarm systems, swings the door open and comes back into the room. He turns to close the door behind him and in so doing just misses seeing ETHAN'S head as it is pulled back up into the ceiling. CUT TO: INT. DUCT - DAY ETHAN throws smoke cannisters and he and KRIEGER crawl frantically back through the duct, the way they came. INT. CIA LANGLEY - LOBBY - DAY CLAIRE walks quickly past the GUARDS in the reception area and out of the building. INT. CIA - COMPUTER ROOM - DAY The TECHNICIAN enters the room and shuts the door. He sees the knife, picks it up, looks at it and then puts it down. He resumes his work at the computer but when he punches up his program, something prints out on his screen. Its header: KEYSTROKE LOG -- FILE DOWNLOAD 11/18/95 9.58 AM And it goes on. The TECHNICIAN'S eyes widen in disbelief. He spins back in his chair and reaches for the nearest telephone. -- seek the truth, follow the lies. http://heimystudio.pixnet.net/blog 程见的创意工厂 --

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