※ [本文转录自 PhD 看板 #1JDzQFIn ] 作者: tamasi22 (魂22) 看板: PhD 标题: [期刊]Improving science and technical writing 时间: Sun Mar 30 16:32:11 2014 FYR. "Is" 在英文国际期刊写作常常会被滥用，标准专业的论文写作 Is所代表的意义远超过我们台湾从小英文教育所学的概念，这边TopSCIedit 资深编辑Patrick想要和您分享一些市面上修改公司常常忽略且没有讲到的深入分析。 Polish-American philosopher and scientist Alfred Korzybski (1879 - 1950) may be best known for coining the phrase “the map is not the territory”, used to describe the relationship between objects and their representation. Over the past century, Korzybski's work on language, philosophy, and the human mind has had a wide range of impacts on art, philosophy, and scientific thinking around the world. In this post, we would like to briefly describe an effective way to improve your English writing for scientific, bio-medical, and engineering journals inspired by Korzybski's work. The Problem with “Is. “Is” - a form of the basic verb “to be” - represents one of the most common words in the English language, and can be used to express identity or predication. In fact, it might be almost impossible to write in English without ever using the word “is” - however, good scholarly writing depends on accuracy, and relying too much on “is” can make your writing fail to meet its potential. What causes the problem, and where do we most often encounter it? How can we improve our English writing by avoiding “is”? Measurements and Classification: The Map is not the Territory. One key problem stems from the fact that measurements and descriptions – from units of mass to diagnostic checklists – are used everywhere in science to describe phenomena, but they are not the phenomena themselves. For example: “The stone is 20kg.” Although most English readers will understand the sentence above intuitively, it describes the object in an illogical way. The object – in this case a stone – does not possess measurement as an inherent feature. Measurement is an activity, a process involving the application of common conventions that we use to describe objects. Therefore, we should use a verb that acknowledges the activity of measurement. A revised sentence, “The stone weighs 20kg,” describes the object in more more accurate, logical, and engaging terms. For another example, consider this sentence: “The patient is schizophrenic.” Read more: http://www.topsciedit.com/en/blog/post-1 --

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