※ 引述《qweqweqweqwe (啪)》之铭言： : 很久没写了 写不好还要麻烦请各位版友帮忙 : 另外我自己也有列出几个疑问@@ 各位先进们可以帮我解答一下吗 : 当然词汇好像有点贫乏XD : 5. Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other : people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you : prefer? : I prefer always in a hurry to go places and get things done than other. 原来主要子句的动词是be verb (some people are...）， 所以应该要写成I prefer to be always in a hurry... : My reasons are as follows. : First of all, living in the hurry tempo in my daily lives, I gain more gain是「努力後获得」，所以通常不会跟pressure搭配， 建议用get就好。pressure不可数，不必用复数。 这个可以查字典确定。 : pressures(这边要复数吗) to let me finish the work more efficiently and : effectively. If people do not suffer from enough pressure to lead to do suffer是负面的意思，可是你想使用的是正面的意思， 其实一样用get就好。 : things more quickly, it may waste a large amount of time. For example, when I : was a student in college, I tend to finish my jobs as quick(adj or adv?) as I 用quickly。你要修饰的是finish，所以用副词。 : can. I used to check my jobs again and again until that I thought the best until I thought I have done my best. : jobs I’ve did. After that, I can do a lot of things what I want and totally : enjoy my leisure time without any things that may bother me. : Second, it help me gain achievement and kudos. One of the major reasons is kudo是什麽？似乎不是很正统的英文。 : that I always suffer from pressure, so that I can train myself to taste : pressure through trials and errors no matter it is heavy(强大的压力怎样形容? strong, intense : Strong?). I, for one, usually try to limit time to achieve one goal under : pressure which may decrease my failures in the future work. Because if people decrease而已吗？eliminate会不会更好？ : always live life at a slower pace, they will suffer from a lot of vital(这边可 : 以用vital吗?没工作活不下去XD) problems, such as doing jobs ineffective. 这句推论有点怪。因果关系顺一下好了 If someone always live at a slow pace, he may do his tasks ineffectively, which in turn would lead to loss of his job. : Eventually, it will let their abilities to drop down at the moment just abilities没有办法drop down 你可以说lead to poor performance : because of they must finish their own work in the limitation of time; 这里不必用分号，句点分成两句就好。 : however, if they do not, they will be fired and lose a great number of : advantages in hunting jobs. : Last but not least, to expose themselves under pressure, people can learn : more useful things and gain more experiences from their daily lives. People : can acquire more knowledge when they are in schools and know how to control : their timetable in efficient ways. Not only can it help people do their jobs : systematically, but it also helps them do their jobs more aggressively. So : that living in the high paces, people can gain more beneficial in their daily Benefits. beneficial是形容词 : lives. : For the reasons above, I prefer to go places and get things done than other. 结论句这样不对。你可以考虑这样写： I prefer to get thing done quickly. : (28: 00 mins)(351 words) 请参考。 --

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