作者dipin (吃喝玩乐满天下)
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标题Re: [写作班] 托福第43周(5)
时间Wed Sep 2 04:06:10 2009
※ 引述《weiqi (我找不到出口)》之铭言:
: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
: Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event)
: is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television.
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: Attending a live performance or watching the same event on television are
: both joyful entertainment in the modern world. I prefer to watching it on
: television rather than attend a live-show, because it is more convenient,
attending (或是 to attend ?)
: comfortable and safer.
: First of all, attending a live performance means that I need to go out for it,
: and dressing up suitable clothes is always bothersome to me. Making up still
意思会混淆
我想应该是说 To use makeup 或是
To put on makeup吧 不知道各位大大觉得应该怎麽写比较好
: taking some time. And besides I should check the bus schedule or otherwise
takes Besides, need to
: driving on my own after I could previously find the nearby parking lots in
因为前面有should 这边要写的话要用drive on
这句最好重新编排,不过今天太晚了 明天再来帮你想...
: the Internet. Consequently, instead of going out for the live-show, watching
: television on the same performance is more convenient to me.
watching the same performance on the television
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