作者svng72 (天与弗取反受其咎)
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标题Re: [写作班] 托福第42周 (vinneko)
时间Sat Aug 29 16:42:09 2009
※ 引述《Vinneko (OD)》之铭言:
: 1. A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do
: you think this person would like and dislike about living in your
: town or city? Why?
: The first thing the person who move in Taipei would like is
: that he would find it is very convenience living here.
有些文句个人认为读起来不是很顺口,或许可以简化一些
What a person who moves to Taipei would like the first
is the convenience of living there.
: The convenience
: stores are so many that one can always find them in 500 meters around
: wherever we are.
便利商店的部分,或许可以举些例子像是7-11或全家之类的。
与其说便利商店很many,不如说分布很广又很密集 spread everywhere.
: Besides, the transportation systems are convenien
t, too.
: There are handreds kinds of bus in Taipei, we can go almost everywhere
: by taking the bus.
: Moreover, with the help of the Mass Rapid Transportation(MRT)
: system, one can go to their destinations faster.
one can go to their...? 一个人要抵达"他们的"目的地?
要就people can go to,或是one can go to his/her ...
不然逻辑不合
: However, the living environment is very crowded in Taipei city, and
: one has to suffer the
crowdness in the public transportations during rush
: hours. Another thing is that the pace of daily life in the city is rush.
其他的大致上还可以,就一些表达的词句上在加以修饰一下就差不多罗
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I would rather be
ashes than dust!
宁化飞灰,不作浮尘。
I would rather that my
spark should burn out
宁投熊熊烈火,光尽而灭。
in a
brilliant blaze than it should be stifled by dry-rot.
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1F:→ Vinneko:Thank you! 08/31 00:04