作者dvlin (Dee)
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标题Re: [写作班] 托福第39周 qweqweqweqwe 4
时间Wed Jul 29 05:08:12 2009
※ 引述《qweqweqweqwe (啪)》之铭言:
: : "When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with
: : success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above?
: I strongly disagree with this statement. Here is why.
: First, despite of the fact that some people said, luck is helpless to
in spite of the fact that... say ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
or despite the fact that...
: approach the achievement, people, who does not have any good opportunities,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ x do
luck is unhelpful to achievements
A "helpless" person or situation is one which does not receive any help.
Something that does not offer help in another is "unhelpful".
: can not success; hence, luck is play an important role in gain the
xx plays ^ing
: achievement. Opportunities only come to well prepared; however, if the
^the
: successful people do not have any chances to assist them reaching the goals,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
: it will not approach to success. These days, a great deal of human being, who
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^people
Then you wouldn't call them "successful" in the beginning of the sentence.
Perhaps "potentially successful people" would be the correct subject.
: works hard, does not success; in spite of they have ability and talent. For
work do , their abilities and talents.
: instance, a person who strives to occupy positions, but, they did not meet a
attain a position xxxxxxxxx may never
^higher
: mentor; therefore no one admire him, this person can not promotion smoothly
^^^^^^^^^^ promote (v.)
recognizes his talent
skills
: in his occupation.
: Admittedly, I disagree with that luck is useless to approach achievement.
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