No grammatical problems. but it should be an essay, not Q&A. An introduction is still needed. The other thing that I would suggest is the personal pronoun. It seems that you choose to use "we" in most of the paras. Therefore, I would suggest that you replace "you" in the 1st para with "we" to make the personal pronoun consistent. ※ 引述《foffy (We all are wry)》之铭言： : 2. People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. : Why is music important to many people? : First of all, listening to music releases pressure. It's not limited to : time and place, and it doesn't cost much. You can easily close your eyes : and enjoy the music whenever you want, temporarily escaping into another : world. : Secondly, it gives new inspirations. For example, a great solo on saxophone : might remind us of some old memories; a heated electric guitar could arouse : our passion as when in adolescent years. : Thirdly, when listening to music, we also share the songwriter's life story : through lyrics. It's interesting and it helps us to understand life more. : Sometimes, we may even relate to their stories pretty much. : Finally, it's a good topic to talk about when with friends. It's fun to know : what others listen to, and it allows us to know them more. : To sum up, it's the most convenient way to sooth ourselves, and also to link : us together by sharing and understanding. --

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