※ 引述《soundspeed (myway)》之铭言： : Imagine that you are preparing for a trip. You plan to be away from your home : for a year. In addition to clothing and personal care items, you can take one : additional thing. What would you take and why? Use specific reasons and : details to support your choice. : == : Besides clothing and personal care items, I would like to take my notebook ==Besides做为段落开头不适当: with me for a long trip. The reason why I choose to bring my notebook with me ===累赘==== : is that it provides me a lot convenience in daily life. It is hard to imagine ==a lot of== a lot of convenience?? 看不懂 for me to live in a world without a computer, especially my intimate notebook. ==赘语== ================ intimate notebook常被认为是私密的笔记本，但你要说ㄉ是亲密ㄉNB吧? : Also, when I feel homesick, documents contained in this machine could help to : ================================== docements contained in this machine????????????看不懂您ㄉ意思 pacify part of my pain. Following paragraph would explain why I select my : notebook as additional one. : First, since I have formed the habit of using computer as part of my life, : it is really inconvenient for me in living without such tool. For example, : everyday in the morning, I browse CNN or BBC website to check what’s : happening in the world. Almost at the same time, I always open Microsoft : Outlook to check if I have new emails from my friends and family members. : Usually, I played some Jazz or classical music to welcome a new day. In : addition, I always use searching engine, Google, to look for information : I need. For instance, when I want to find a place, maybe a restaurant or a : spot, I always type the key words in Google searching bar to find the exact : location on Google map. It really saves me a lot of time and energy. I guess : this function is especially necessary when I go out for a long trip. : Also, I cannot take letters and photographs of my family and friends with me : all the time since they are heavy and take a lot of space in my backpack. : If I have a light notebook, I could save these treasure memories in the disk : of my notebook. Then, every time I miss my family and friends, I could browse : these documents in my personal notebook to alleviate my homesick. : To sum up, my notebook has become part of my life. It provides me a lot of : necessary functions in daily life, including understanding the world, : communicating with my friends, and even handling my works. Also, it gives : me a space to collect what I shared with my friends and family. As I’m : going to somewhere far away for a long time, I really need this additional : and special one with me. 大概看了依下，发现重点在於中文式思维和用字，许多字词很明显都是查汉英翻译得来， 建议还是要多用英英字典。 偶尔发现这个版，提供依下个人意见，多多包涵。 --

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