※ 引述《soundspeed (myway)》之铭言： : Some people believe that a college or university education should be : available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be : available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree : with? Explain why. : == : In my personal definition, good students are those who have specific 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　-------- X : expertise of their own best interests. Good students are not those only -- in : follow elders’ order or look for their own superiority in academic record. ^ ------------------------------------------------- the (2) ---------------- (1) : So, I think every student is a good student possibly for a filed and colleges -------------------- ----------- ???? (3) : or universities should provide chance for all students. Following will show : why I support this viewpoint. --------- (4) (1) 我建议改成 follow what the elders say (2) => work hard to attain excellent school performance (3) 去掉 and，另起一句。 (4) The following statement/argument : First of all, everyone has great potential in certain field. ---------------- (5) : One could be a : great master in a field of his or her best interest. We can not ignore such : possibility. Meanwhile, I think no other person has right to determine which ---------- ------- --------------- ^ Moreover, (5) no one/nobody the : kind of knowledge is needed and which one is not needed. Diversity of : knolwdeg is necessary to maintain and even improve the human society. -------- (6) : For example, arts provide us joyful experience of abstract and aesthetic : formation. Science leads us to the discovery of unknown parts of this world. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- (7) : Engineering helps us to realize the ideas or concepts which could make our ----- enables : life better and more convenient. So, all students of diverse fields should be : allowed to higher education. (5) 可以删去 (6) 你是指　多元的知识有必要被保留？还是，多元的知识可以保存人类社会？ 如果是前者，要改成 to be maintained；如果是後者，就不用改。 (7) Arts provides humans with aesthetic experience and touches. Science plays an important role in discovering the unknown parts of this world. : In addition, I don’t think good students necessarily promise the best ------ (8) : performance. Sometimes the best work is done by those who are not originally : considered as good students. In other words, those who can concentrate on : their work and dedicate themselves are more reliable than good students. ^ are : Diligent students can balance their drawbacks by devoting themselves. ^ to [what?] : In summary, since all kinds of knowledge are needed to sustain a complete : society, we need students of different skills. Even more, we need them to ----------- people with : push our society forward. Besides, those who work hard can even do better : than those who are smart. They intend to dedicate themselves for their to : responsibilities. Thus, higher education should be available for all students : instead of only good students. (8) Do not make any contraction in a formal article. --

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