作者dvlin (Dee)
看板ST-English
标题Re: [写作班] 托福第20周 ypyp, 2
时间Sun Sep 21 10:27:05 2008
※ 引述《ypyp (牙周病)》之铭言:
: 2. People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of
: modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do
: you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and
: examples in your answer.
: To escape stress and difficulties in life, I think the best way is to
: plan an effective and workable schedule. Of course good recreational
,
: activities can help people relax and temporarily forget their difficulties;
: however, finally these difficulties are unavoidable. With a good schedule can
xxxxxxx xxxx A
: smooth over my stress much better than any other recreational activities.
: I have a lot of interests, such as reading, singing, origami, sports,
: etc. However, none of them can really make me relax without a thoughtful
: schedule. For me, it is important to face all tasks I have at once. I always
: list all my tasks down, check their priorities and give each a proper
: proportion of time and effort to finish it. It is important for me to know
: how much time and resource I have, after checking these information I can do
. After ,
: my interested recreational activities without worrying about wasting too much
: time. Only in such way I can really escape the stress.
^a ^^^^^^
*
*I think your method can be very effective because it does more than merely
"escaping" stress; rather, it takes excess stress away from the beginning.
I suggest you rewrite the last sentence this way:
"This way, not only do I escape stress, I avoid having too much stress in
the first place."
: It may sound a little too serious; some might say that sometimes all we
: need is to leave the hard situation we faced. When I was in high school, I
face
: ever thought that as well. I skipped classes and went to play volleyball or
had thought
: bridge games, just hoped to forget the stress due to heavy class-work. Did I
hoping
: really relax? Not at all! When I did these recreational activities, I can not
: forget those had not been done. The result was: I had neither finished my
that work (singular)
: work nor got fun or release. Thus, I finally found that only a well-planned
^^^^^^^("relief" might be a better phrase here)
: schedule can really make me feel relaxed and enjoy what I interested.
was interested in.
: In sum, although planning an effective schedule seems not so intuitive
: for escaping stress and difficulties, it does the best way for me, and I
^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
as a means/method of "it does the best for me"
or "it is the best way for me"
or "it proves to be the best way for me"
: believe that it is also a very good policy for those busy in modern life.
Interesting idea backed by a great example!
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