※ 引述《dividi (倦怠ing)》之铭言： : There is no doubt that we can access ample information from Internet. on the : However, whether the information is valuable or not becomes a question. In my : view, Internet brings us more good than harm. : Firstly, Internet has totally changed the educational way from passive or "educational methods" : learning to active learning. In the past, teachers acted important roles to played : provide knowledge, which might be selective, to students. Therefore, students : were imbued by teachers and lost their independent thinking abilities. : However, with Internet, students can find information by themselves rather ^the : then just wait for the lectures. Also, students are able to search more waiting ^for : information from different aspects, which helps to broaden students' views their : and provide more dimensional thinking. : Secondly, Internet is a backchannel of information for the people who live in ^the : the autarchic countries. Although arbitrary rulers always attempt to control : the Internet, it is still too hard to restrain the information within to block outside information. : borders. Through many platforms such as blog, MSN, or Youtube, it is getting blogs : easier and easier for people to know the outside world. Therefore, Internet or "to learn about" ^the : has alleviated the power of knowledge manipulation. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^*I love this idea! : Of course, some people might argue that Internet also causes some negative : effects. For example, it let adolescents more easily to access to amorous lets : pictures or videos and subsequently induces social problems. However, I : attribute this kind of problems to the teachers and parents rather than to : the Internet. Internet is a neutral database for everyone to obtain ^The : information they concerned. It is this characteristic that makes Internet so : meaningful. Therefore, the teachers and families should teach their children : how to distinguish inappropriate information and notice how they use the : Internet. By doing so, children can enjoy the benefits and avoid the harm : simultaneously. : To sum up, we should not write off the advantages of Internet just because of ^the : some manageable problems. Internet is a neutral tool for us to use. If we can ^The : utilize it properly, it will bring us as much valuable information as we : desire. Good essay, clear and strong arguments! In some places you put "the" in front of "Internet", and in some places you didn't. As a rule, there is always a "the" in front, and "Internet" is always capitalized. -- 一个 学术英文写作 领域的讨论板 在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉 【 分组讨论区 】 --> 11 国家研究院 政治, 文学, 学术 --> 科学学术研究院 --> 学术总合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 学术英文/论文写作班 --

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