作者dvlin (Dee)
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标题Re: [写作班] 托福第16周 liuyijen,4
时间Thu Aug 21 01:46:32 2008
※ 引述《liuyijen ( 阿仔)》之铭言:
: Although to work independently is also an important ability, it is more
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: possible to work with other people than to work alone. It is definitely
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*Although "possible" and "probable" both translate to "可能", in a strictly
technical sense, "possible" is very black-and-white: something is either
possible or impossible; "more possible" doesn't not make sense logically.
*I think you can describe with more specificity, and say it's more
"effecient", "productive", or some other adjective, to work with others.
: more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team, because
: our society is build on the foundation of united.
built
: Since I was a college student, most of the teachers liked us to do group works.
: At first, I thought the teachers just wanted us to break the ice with other
: students. However, to my surprise, I found out that by discussing as a group,
: I could think of more ideas and inspired by my classmates. I could come up with
: some creative answers, which was the last thing I would imagine before.
: Team works are also common in most of the companies. By cooperating with
xxxxxx
: coworkers, we can find out a better solution or a better idea efficiently.
xxx
: For example, says there were 30 pages of documents which were waited to be
let's say ^^^^
* waiting
: typed in computer. Each person can type 1 document in 1 hour. If one worker
into the could
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: typed it alone, he would need 30 hours to finish the typing job. It did not
: seem to be a easy job, because he might get bored easily. But if 15 people
: typed the document at the same time, it took only 2 hours to finish all of
: them. It will be easier and faster for everyone, and they would finish the
would
* (
*Maintain the same tense.)
: job before getting board.
bored
: Besides, we can easily find out mistakes we made in the works by cooperating
xxx
: with people. I have a good experience about this opinion. Couple months ago,
^A
: I wrote an essay about the business model of Walmart with my classmates. Each
: of us was responsible for a part of essay. The biggest challenge was that we
: had to write it in English, so it was a little difficult to us. The first
: meeting time, we exchanged our parts of the essay to check out if there were
: something needed to be modified, and everyone found some grammar or vocabulary
: mistakes from the other one’s parts. In fact, all of us had checked our parts
: of essay again and again, but we just can not notice some stupid mistakes like
: “You was” or “three merchant” in our own parts. It was really important to
: have somebody to do double check work.
: All in all, 3 normal people’s intelligent overcome one genius’. From the
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*There is an actual old English adage for describing this type of situation:
"Three heads are better than one."
: reasons above, I think team work is a better way to do most of works.
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