作者nozomii (nozomi)
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标题[写作班] 托福第18周 nozomii, 1
时间Mon Aug 11 00:14:02 2008
※ 引述《dvlin (Dee)》之铭言：
: Choose one of the following topics.
: 1. A foreign visitor has only one day in your country. Where should this
: visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reasons and details to
: support your choice.
In my opinion, I think the foreign visitor should go to Mountain A-Li.
Since this visitor can only stay in Taiwan for one day, he or she has to go
to a place that can represent the image of Taiwan most clearly and show the
most beautiful part of Taiwan. There is the schedule I made to represent the
best parts of Mountain A-Li to support my recommendation.
First, starting from morning, you can take the special train which was once
built for transporting timber to see the most spectacular sun-rising and have
a good starting of this trip. Then, you can walk on the path in the forest
which is famous of divine trees to recover the stressful nerves and relax
your whole body. After the long walking, you can choose to find a restaurant
to have an aboriginal meal for lunch and watch the exotic shows which are
performed by the aborigine of Taiwan.
In the afternoon, you can watch the flowers. No matter
which season you come, there are always different kinds of flower blossom
waiting for you. On the other hand, you can also enjoy the
Taiwanese tea here and take some rest on the green.
During the night, you can watch the twinkle stars and feel the comfortable
wind blows on your face, take you to dream to end the day.
On the whole, Mountain A-Li is a place that you can spend one day from
morning to night to feel the different type of beauty at one time in Taiwan.
Since Taiwan is famous of its breathtaking views of the mountains, Mountain
A-Li is the must visit spot to see the gorgeous views. Someone may suggest
that there are more mountains which are worth to see. But in my opinion, since
the visitor has only one day in Taiwan, it is important to use the time
efficiently and see the most aspects of Taiwan as possible. Therefore,
Mountain A-Li is the only spot that you can do the most different kinds of
activities in the same place without wasting the time on transportation,
and enjoy the every time period of one day in Taiwan.
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1F：→ philJamy:he or she=> 看是要用he/she/they 整篇文章一致即可 08/11 22:52
2F：→ philJamy:Here is the schedule / he can(not you) 08/11 22:54
3F：→ philJamy:Some may argue that/ 08/11 22:55
4F：→ philJamy:introduction 和conclusion的长度和内容可以做调整 08/11 22:56