※ 引述《lovegracie (爱情是两面刃)》之铭言： : : 4. Some people say that computers have made life easier and more : : convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more : : complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons : : and examples to support your answer. : As a college student who uses computer almost every day, s : I agree with the statement that computers have made our lives : easier and more convenient instead of complicated and stressful. : It is known that the topic is not only controversial but also complex , : that deserves more considerations. In the following discussion, and it : I'll develop my ideas in sufficient depth and details. x : Some people consider that computers cause more problem than it solves. ^ -> they solve : They believe that computers make people more isolating than before. isolated : For example, people tend to send greeting cards through the internet Internet : instead of the real card which may be able to represent more sincere : greeting and blessing. Besides, the invention of computers makes people : rely on these high-technology devices to solve a lot of problems rather : than figuring out the answer themselves. In their opinion, computers truly : have made lives less simple and pure than before. : However, as far as I'm concerned, the computers undoubtedly made our life ^have <- ^^^^ : more comfortable and convenient. In this information age, almost every : tasks or chores in the daily life need the support of computers to some x x needs ("every" + singular noun) : extend. For example, I can turn in my final report to the professor extent (verb: to extend; noun: extent) : instead of dropping in his office in person. It saves my time spending spent : on transportation, and I can use the spare time to do something else : instead. Besides, through the computer, I am able to chat with my friends : around the world and even see them through webcom immediately. It makes the webcam : me feel closer to my friends and let us bond with each other closer. lets xxxxxx : Furthermore, the usage of computers may have caused tremendous progress : in today's society. It is know that plenty of scientific programs, which known : may benefit human in several ways, rely on the operation of computers. : To give an example, the development of artificial intelligence may help : human beings save a lot of energy and time, thus, they can lead an easier : life. This kind of technology requires the strong support by computer devices : which are delicate and efficient enough. In this way, it is obvious : that computers can definitely make our life more progressive. : To sum up, it is clear that the reasons I mention above are not only solid : but also convincing to support my point of view. I firmly support the : statement that computers have made our life easier and more convenient. Several small errors here and there seem to do with singular/plural verb or noun forms. It's easy to miss them when your sentences get longer. : 呼~ 大家都怎麽贴文章的啊@@ 我从word贴过来每次都要修好久~~ I'm not sure if there's an easier way to do it, other than typing directly into the BBS. Does anyone know any tricks? For example, can you do a word- wrap or a line-wrap in Microsoft Word? -- 一个 学术英文写作 领域的讨论板 在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉 【 分组讨论区 】 --> 11 国家研究院 政治, 文学, 学术 --> 科学学术研究院 --> 学术总合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 学术英文/论文写作班 --

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