作者dvlin (Dee)
看板ST-English
标题Re: [写作班] 托福第14周 dwings, 3
时间Tue Jul 1 05:21:36 2008
※ 引述《dwings (夜空的精灵)》之铭言:
: If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an
: inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher
: salary? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
: In my opinion, I will depends on the context of job to hire the suitable
x
: employees. Nowadays there are various kinds of jobs, and each of them need
x , needs
: different skills and abilities. Choosing the person who really fit the
fits
: conditions of the job, coworkers, leaders, even the company is more important
^and
: than how much you have to pay. There are still many reasons I support this
: argument, and I will mention some of important ones below.
: To begin with, when the demands of a job weight more on the passion and
weigh
: personality more than the skills, I think it is better to hire the novice.
xxxx(redundant)
: Because people will be more motivated by something new or challenging,
: they are willing to put more effort in spite of hard work. For example,
^
: when I was a college student, I had a part-time job in the cram school to
: promote the lessons. Although I had no experiences about marketing or social
: skills, I still got higher performance than others. My leader even increased
: my salaries when I went to work just for three days for my hard working
hard work
: and courage to talk to anybody. Therefore, I think some jobs even more
: suitable for novice.
^a
: In addition, if the ability of the job is complicate, the boss should pick
^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^ complicated
On the other hand, *Suggest rephrasing
: the employee with more experience. Although the company has to pay higher
: to the experienced employee, it would save more cost to teach or train a new
the cost of teaching or...
*
*"to save more cost
to teach..." means to save more cost, and the saved cost
would be used to teach or train a new employee.
"to save the cost
of teach
ing or train
ing" means to save the cost that would
otherwise be used to train a new one.
: one. Moreover, there are some implicit profits to hire a experienced person.
: He can share experiences or support others when they get into trouble or need
: help. Take me for example, when I became an experienced employees in the
: cram school, I transferred to be leader of a marketing group. Although my
: salary was higher, I understood that I also had more responsibilities,
: such as deciding the strategy of marketing and arranging the schedule of the
: program. Furthermore, I even had the pressure to train my subordinates to be
: better rather than just do my work. So I even spend more time to work
spent
: comparing to the novice.
: In conclusion, I think the boss should choose the employees depends on
depending
: the needs of the job in spite of the salary.
: 很久没有写作文
: 请大家不吝指教...>.<:
: 由於我是限时写的
: 所以最後一段不完整
: 请见谅....>.<~
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1F:推 dwings:Thanks a lot...*^^* 07/01 14:26