※ 引述《azure0116 (冲阿.炫风冲峰)》之铭言： : 写作时遇到的问题: 如何写"在严格与放松中取得平衡" : 如何写 "累积生活经验" : topic : Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others : prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, : work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to : support your choice. : 本文 : I like to work for an employer. : My personality isn't suitable to be a manager. I do not like to take many : responsibilities to the whole business. I always : do a bad job in a pressure condition, while if somebody assigned work to me, : usually I can try my best to achieve their standards. xxxxxxx ^usually : I used to have some chances to be a chief leader in a sports club when senior in : high. All my heart wants to have a great award in the competition. I assigned ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ With all my heart, I wanted to win... : some hard basic training every day. In my view, it is fun to do it and it is was ^^^^^ : enjoying working hard with our teammates. However, those teammates say yes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ said it was enjoyable to work hard with... : but never showed up in the daily route. They even speak ill behind my back. routine spoke : At first, I am angry with them, but I found angry will makes it worsen. was that anger only made it worse. : During that period, I did a really awful job in my sports and relationship : with others. Finally, I admitted to myself, I am not a good leader. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^* *You have a choice here to write in one of two ways: 1. I admitted to myself that I was not a good leader. 2. I admitted to myself, "I am not a good leader." : It is so hard to get balances as a manager in to be kind or tough. If I am ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ were to find the balance : kind to those employees, most of them will too relax to obey my will. If I am would be too relaxed to... were Suggestion: "obey my will" -> "remain disciplined" : too tough to my employees, most cases I will mess up the relationship with xxxxxxxxxx would ^most likely : them, then I will make myself unhappy. However, one cannot avoid learning to and would : be an employer. In whole life, people always have many chances to be in xxxxx : charge. Just gain more life experience, be better and better. -- 一个 学术英文写作 领域的讨论板 在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉 【 分组讨论区 】 --> 11 国家研究院 政治, 文学, 学术 --> 科学学术研究院 --> 学术总合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 学术英文/论文写作班 --

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