※ 引述《yihuan (何不食肉糜)》之铭言： : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents or : other adult relatives should make important decisions for their : older (15 to 18 year-old) teenage children. Use specific reasons : and examples to support your opinion. : In today's world inundated with diversity, although it is difficult : for teenage children to make decision from a lot of choices, ^a : nevertheless, if we always make decisions for our teenage, they ^^^^^^^^^^^^ teenagers *This is unnecessary because of the "although" in the previous sentence. : wouldn't know how to make good determinations on their own in : the future. : To begin with, making decisions is a kind of life skill like driving; : no one could learn it well without any practicing. Nobody could : acquire the driving skill by just seeing the driver how to drive. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ suggestion: "how others drive" : Making decisions is also the same, if we always make decisions for : youth, they never make decisions on their own, and they wouldn't ^the (or our) : acquire the skill forever. In fact, making decisions is not an easy xxx : job. Before you make a decision, you have to think many aspects of ^^^^^ "think about" or "consider" : the situation and any possible conclusion followed your decisions. : Although the process is difficult and torturing, but you could learn ^^^^^^^^ ^^^ *Again, you only need one of "although" and "but", not both. : a lot from the process, it makes your thoughts become more and more ^and : mature or discreet. Moreover, if you do a good decision, you could : get more self-confidence and self-esteem; you would have more courage : to try to make other determinations in the future. As long as you : keep trying it, you would be more and more familiar with the process xx : of making decisions. If you never try it, you also never understand : how to determine anything around your life. : Additional, sometimes you might make some wrong determinations; it Additionally, (or "In addition,") : is not meaningful or useless. Even though you make a bad decision, : you would learn how to face the result and take responsibility : for it. It also would be a good lesson. Moreover, you could recheck ^^^^^^^ Suggestion: "review" : that why do you make the wrong decisions, the rechecking process xxxx . The : is also benefit for your thoughts. Take my country, Taiwan, for beneficial : example, the older teenage children in Taiwan have to face some : serious decisions in their life. They should choose whether to : enter university to continue studying or to find a job. Even their : parents shouldn't make the decision for them, because no one knows : them as well as themselves. Even they choose the wrong side; they ^if chose , : still could change to the other side in the future. In the process, : those teenage would understand themselves more and more. The : experience would be an excellent didactic material for them to : choose the way of future life. Parents or teachers should be : consultants or audiences in those teenage life rather than hosts. : In conclusion, maybe older teenage children always make some immature : or incorrect decisions, if we always make decisions for them in : order to avoid those immature decisions. These older teenage would : never know how to a good decision and never be the host of their life. -- 一个 学术英文写作 领域的讨论板 在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉 【 分组讨论区 】 --> 11 国家研究院 政治, 文学, 学术 --> 科学学术研究院 --> 学术总合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 学术英文/论文写作班 --

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