作者Xinlong (冰狩)
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标题[写作班] 托福第14周 Xinlong 1
时间Sat Jun 21 13:38:09 2008
※ 引述《dvlin (Dee)》之铭言:
: Choose one of the following topics.
: 1. Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy
: them and replace them with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and
: examples to support your opinion.
I prefer a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings than destroy
them and replace them with modern buildings, Even the cost of keeping will
be more expensive then to destroy and replace them. I think keep the historic
buildings will give us or ours children more benefit then destroy and replace
them with modern buildings.
The historic buildings are indicator of city, keep original face of city
and blend with another old buildings. Those buildings are taught us or ours
children its history, let us or ours children learned and understand what its
buildings happened.
If destroy them and replace them with modern buildings, the towering
buildings are too sharp to congruous with the other. If two building as close
as each other, one of those is a historic building, another is a modren
building, I don't think historic building is better then modren building,
because both building have characteristic by themselves. So, we can't abandon
one of them.
Maybe living in a modren building will be more comfortable then a old
building, but the historic building is necessary in a city. If we can keep it,
we should do it. Not only can we learn history about it like virtu, but also
acquire that historic buildings is human cultural heritage.
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Have a nice day.
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※ 编辑: Xinlong 来自: 59.117.97.63 (06/22 21:20)
※ 编辑: Xinlong 来自: 59.117.97.63 (06/22 21:20)
1F:推 jennyQ:then or than? please recheck the spellings. ^^ 06/23 12:25
2F:推 jennyQ:last paragraph: in "a" city. Not only CAN WE..... 06/23 12:29
3F:→ jennyQ:注意倒装句文法,对等连接词用法需一致,最後一句错了 06/23 12:32
4F:→ jennyQ:注意倒装句文法,另外对等连接词用法需一致,最後一句错了 06/23 12:33
Excuse me, could you tell me more?
※ 编辑: Xinlong 来自: 163.13.246.135 (06/23 13:51)
5F:推 jennyQ:最後一句想表达什麽呢?可以练习用英文思考来写作较流畅喔 06/23 20:15
6F:→ jennyQ:Not only can we learn history from historic buildings 06/23 20:15
7F:推 jennyQ:, but also acquire that historic buildings are human 06/23 20:24
8F:→ jennyQ:cultural heritage. not only but also是对等连接词 06/23 20:25
I just want ask why is use"can we", not "we can".
Thanks
※ 编辑: Xinlong 来自: 61.217.246.66 (06/23 23:37)
9F:推 jennyQ:因为否定词置句首必须倒装 BTW, want "to", "why I should 06/23 23:57
10F:→ jennyQ:use" 06/23 23:57